[Gpg4win-commits] r1254 - trunk/doc/website

[scm-commit@wald.intevation.org]

Author: bh
Date: 2009-08-12 19:49:07 +0200 (Wed, 12 Aug 2009)
New Revision: 1254

Modified:
   trunk/doc/website/index.htm4
   trunk/doc/website/support.htm4
Log:
Improve some of the english web pages.


Modified: trunk/doc/website/index.htm4
===================================================================
--- trunk/doc/website/index.htm4	2009-08-12 16:57:16 UTC (rev 1253)
+++ trunk/doc/website/index.htm4	2009-08-12 17:49:07 UTC (rev 1254)
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
 <a href="documentation.html">Gpg4win for Novices</a>.
 </p>
 <p>
-We recommend to subscribe to the
+We recommend subscribing to the
 <a href="http://lists.wald.intevation.org/mailman/listinfo/gpg4win-announce"
   >Gpg4win announcement mailing list</a>
 to be automatically informed about new releases and other

Modified: trunk/doc/website/support.htm4
===================================================================
--- trunk/doc/website/support.htm4	2009-08-12 16:57:16 UTC (rev 1253)
+++ trunk/doc/website/support.htm4	2009-08-12 17:49:07 UTC (rev 1254)
@@ -12,38 +12,37 @@
 The support available through <a href="community.html">mailing lists,
 web forums and bug tracker</a>
 is usually provided by volunteers.
-Due to the huge number of users, there is a good chance to
-receive helpful answers.
+Due to the huge number of users, there is a good chance of
+receiving helpful answers.
 Naturally, timely and exhaustive answers can not be guaranteed.
 </p>
 
 <p>
 In case timely answers, quick software modification or general
-consultancy for using Gpg4win (installation, configuration etc.) is
+consulting for using Gpg4win (installation, configuration etc.) is
 needed, the German free software companies
 <a href="http://www.intevation.de">Intevation
 GmbH</a>, <a href="http://www.g10code.de">g10code GmbH</a> und 
 <a href="http://www.kdab.de">KDAB</a> jointly
-offer respective professional support.
-With each customer we have a individual support agreement
-optimzed for their needs, so you
-will not find a price table for the Gpg4win support.
+offer suitable professional support.
+The support contracts are tailored to the needs of the individual
+customer so that we do not show a price table here.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Please contact us about the contact form below or directly to <a
+Please contact us with the contact form below or via email to <a
 href="mailto:gpg4win-professional at intevation.de">gpg4win-professional at intevation.de</a>
-if you plan to buy professional support from the three above-named companies.
-With your inquiry please describe your needs (e.g. which of the Gpg4win
-applications to be supported, which crypto-workflows you have or
-want to establish), the number of users, your IT infratructure (e.g.
+if you plan to buy professional support from the three companies named above.
+Please describe your needs (e.g. which of the Gpg4win
+applications you want support for, which crypto-workflows you have or
+want to establish), the number of users, your IT infrastructure (e.g.
 which Windows versions, terminal servers, virtual servers), which
-tasks you want to do on your own and finally what you expect from us.
+tasks you want to do yourself and what you expect from us.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-We will come to you with a estimation of costs and/or questions to
-clarify some aspects for better understanding.
+We will get back to you with cost estimates and, if necessary, questions to
+clarify what you need.
 </p>
 
 
@@ -64,17 +63,17 @@
     <p>
         <input type="radio" name="product" value="support" 
         checked>professional support for using <b>Gpg4win 2.0.0</b>.<br>
-        (You have e.g. a problem with the configuration in your
-         company or you need support for your productiv use of Gpg4win? 
+        (You have, for instance, a problem with the configuration in your
+         company or you need support for your use of Gpg4win? 
          Then we offer you our technical support.)
     </p>
     <p>
         <input type="radio" name="product" value="development"
         >further development of <b>Gpg4win 2.0.0</b>.<br>
-        (You miss an important feature in Gpg4win? You have special
-        ideas to aid the further development of Gpg4win2? 
-        Then please contact us! We will arrange for you an individual
-        offer - after estimation with our developer.)
+        (You miss an important feature in Gpg4win? You have
+        ideas for the further development of Gpg4win2? 
+        Then please contact us! We will make you an individual
+        offer.)
     </p>
     </td>
 </tr>
@@ -97,7 +96,7 @@
   <td><input name="email" type="text" size="50" maxlength="50"></td>
 </tr>
 <tr valign="top">
-  <td><b>Telephon</b></td>
+  <td><b>Telephone</b></td>
   <td><input name="phone" type="text" size="50" maxlength="50"></td>
 </tr>
 <tr valign="top">
@@ -105,14 +104,14 @@
   <td>
     <input type="radio" name="preferred_contact" value="email" checked><b>Email</b>
     <input type="radio" name="preferred_contact" value="postal"><b>By Post</b>
-    <input type="radio" name="preferred_contact" value="phone"><b>Telephon</b>
+    <input type="radio" name="preferred_contact" value="phone"><b>Telephone</b>
   </td>
 </tr>
 <tr valign="top">
   <td><b>Deductions</b></td>
   <td>
     <input type="checkbox" name="discount" value="public">Public/non-profit organization (administration, university, etc)<br>
-    <input type="checkbox" name="discount" value="naming">Naming as customer (public naming as customer of Greenbone permitted)<br>
+    <input type="checkbox" name="discount" value="naming">Naming as customer (public naming as customer permitted)<br>
   </td>
 
 </tr>