[Gpg4win-commits] r1253 - in trunk/doc: . website

[scm-commit@wald.intevation.org]

Author: bernhard
Date: 2009-08-12 18:57:16 +0200 (Wed, 12 Aug 2009)
New Revision: 1253

Modified:
   trunk/doc/ChangeLog
   trunk/doc/website/community.htm4
Log:
website/community.htm4: Fixed some wording.


Modified: trunk/doc/ChangeLog
===================================================================
--- trunk/doc/ChangeLog	2009-08-12 16:52:57 UTC (rev 1252)
+++ trunk/doc/ChangeLog	2009-08-12 16:57:16 UTC (rev 1253)
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 2009-08-12  Bernhard Reiter <bernhard at intevation.de>
 
 	* website/about.htm4: Improved the about text.
-	* website/download.htm4: Fixed some wording.
+	* website/download.htm4,  website/community.htm4: Fixed some wording.
 
 2009-08-12  Emanuel Schuetze  <emanuel.schuetze at intevation.de>
 

Modified: trunk/doc/website/community.htm4
===================================================================
--- trunk/doc/website/community.htm4	2009-08-12 16:52:57 UTC (rev 1252)
+++ trunk/doc/website/community.htm4	2009-08-12 16:57:16 UTC (rev 1253)
@@ -8,20 +8,18 @@
 
 <h1>Gpg4win Community</h1>
 
-<p>Like any Free Software community Gpg4win needs persons
+<p>Like any Free Software community Gpg4win needs people
 who <a href="contribute.html">get involved</a> with the initiative.
-One step is e.g. to <a href="reporting-bugs-de.html">reporting bugs</a>.</p>
+One step is e.g. to <a href="reporting-bugs-de.html">reporting problems</a>.</p>
 
-<p>You can communicate with the Gpg4win community via different media:
-Mailing lists, web forums and IRC:</p>
+<p>You can communicate with the Gpg4win community via 
+mailing lists, web forums and IRC:</p>
 
 <h2>Mailing lists</h2>
 
-<p>There are following mailing lists (in English and German language) for the
-Gpg4win community.<br>
 <em>Note:</em>
-Please subscribe first if you want to send an email to a list. Therby
-you avoid that your message wait for affirmation by the list moderator.
+Please subscribe before you are sending an email to a list. Thereby
+you avoid that your message gets hold for moderation first.
 </p>
 
 <dl>
@@ -66,7 +64,7 @@
   </dd>
 
   <dt><b>Gpg4win-commits</b></dt>
-  <dd>SVN-Commits for developer (English)<br>
+  <dd>SVN-Commits for developers (English)<br>
     <a
 href="http://lists.wald.intevation.org/mailman/listinfo/gpg4win-commits/">Subscribe</a>
 | <a
@@ -77,7 +75,7 @@
 
 <h2>Web Forums</h2>
 
-<p>As alternative to mailing lists you can use following Gpg4win web
+<p>As an alternative to mailing lists you can use following Gpg4win web
 forums for your questions and discussions.<br>
 <em>Note:</em> 
 You have to <a